People living in large cities have to face many problems in every day life. What are those problems.
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns.
In this contemporary era, citizens staying in big towns are meeting with lots of issues in their routine. As I am concerned I will discuss both problems and solutions in the coming passages.
To begin with, due to advancement in technology numerous difficulties are being looked by people. Firstly, the inclining count of automobiles creates traffic jams from that people and students get late from their work or institutions. Secondly, the rate of accidents have been rising day by day due to which mortality has reached at its peak point. Furthermore, contamination gases that are exhaled by vehicles is affecting people health with different types of diseases such as asthma and diabetes. Also, the cost of living is very high. Inhabitants have to pay higher prices for housing, transport and even food.
On the other hand, ti tackle out from these difficulties the higher authorities is forcing people to shift towards rural or countryside areas. In addition to this, they must implement platab facilities for instance, universities, schools, market, roads, hospital, garden and transport system. Therefore, government should instruct people living in cities about the lifestyle of villages. After that, all the things must be affordable so that people can fulfill their dreams by exploring the knowledge related to countryside. Finally, installing equal rights and rules we can see decline in crime and poverty rate that will take our country's economy ahead.
In conclusion, I believe that it is the responsibility of government to look after that welfare of it's people. The migration to smaller towns could workout by providing city-like opportunities and facilities as all countries will start follow each other that will sink the pollution index.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36690647482 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86922313267 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669064748201 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2556402493 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159423345587 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490484176746 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599613446581 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766017567839 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462112609643 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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