Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is waste of money. government must invest ths money in public service instead. to what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people believe that investment in art, music or theater is wasting of money in this period, while there are still have many problems, which are more necessary and government should concentrate on such as public service. I firmly support that music, art and theater are one of the most important features with some reasons and it will be addressed in this essay.
According to the rapid development of society in economy, medical or education, it creates many pressures on people who living in the modern life. The rate of killing myself by depression is increasing every single day. It has been proven that art, music and theater are the best way for people express their stress after work or school. To be specific, art and music has become one of the method in metal hospital. Patient always have a time to hear music for entering and cure psychological wounds.
Moreover, arts, music and theater are the means of communication between people and culture. Due to there have some powerful ability in connecting the emotion of human such as music create a beautiful rhythm which can tough people heart, and art can create the story that can take their tears. To be specific, people will have the same feelings when watching the same movie or listening to same song, that means they can understand clearly without saying.
To sum up, spending money on the art, music and theater are never wasted, because they brings many benefits for the person's life.
- The table below gives information about government expenditure in five sectors relating to domestic policy in Germany Italy and the United Kingdom in 2009 49
- the graph below shows the employment rate of each gender in four countries in 2002 71
- The table below gives information about the economic value of international students in US in 2005 2010 and 2015 The bar graph shows change in the number of international students from three countries in two of those years 87
- The tale below gives information about management positions help by women in European country in 2006 75
- the three pir chart below show the percentage of US music album sales by genre in 2008 2009 and 2010 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...y in this period, while there are still have many problems, which are more necessary...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... theater are never wasted, because they brings many benefits for the persons life.
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...cause they brings many benefits for the persons life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.864 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37952600322 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6365371267 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142918910323 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536312595486 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706555173483 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947422798186 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799449404733 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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