Parents should control children behaviour but some says they shouldnot be controlled.
Write both the viewes and give you opinion.
Parents are always considered as a primary teacher for children when it comes to teaching them moral values. It is often argued that kid's behavior should be controlled by their parents, whilst others disagree and think that they should not manage them. This essay will discuss both points of view and also agrees with the former view.
Many support the idea that children should have the freedom to decide by itself and parents should not intervene anyway. This is to say that, it encouraged them to come forward and live their life as an independent and to choose and make their career as per there interests. Despite this, parents must be involved when their children take their life-changing decision. This is because, after all, they have more experience and they know what is better for their children.
Turning to the other side of the argument, if parents have authority on their children from their childhood, they come up as more disciplined and well-behaved. As children spent most of the time with their parents and learn what they taught them. A recently published report in Times Now states that kids who live under their parent's guidance are more obedience and have respect towards their elders and full of empathy.
In conclusion, I would say if children are not guided properly by their parents they could adopt the wrong path, that is why it is always good if parents have an upper hand on their children and keep them showing the right path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, well, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8406374502 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31867033519 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6856663964 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21916719736 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999953887403 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429969562453 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153883518485 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425893627729 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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