SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT SPORT IS AN ESSENTIAL PART OF SCHOOL LIFE FOR CHILDREN, WHILE OTHERS FEEL IT SHOULD BR PURELY OPTIMAL. DISCUSS THERE OPPOSING VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
The sporting events are an important for the students lives, it benefit the student to enhance their knowledge, apart from studying the regular subject. I strongly agree with the aforementioned subject. This essay will discuss the debate, along with concluding views.
While the first key to note is that the student should participating in extra curriculum activities like sports, where the student will gain wide range of knowledge in different filed, moreover the student should poses their own interest in sport activities to success in their life. For example the student who cannot excel in their academic, should be excellently performing in sport activities, which means they will lead their life as a sportsmanship, and earn a good amount. The student spending few hours in sport activities can also helps to brainwash their mind after learning academic session
In addition to that, there is other student who spent their leisure time to play sports activities rather than learning informative knowledge. For instance ,the student cannot concentrate to their studies after playing the sport activities, thus affecting in the normal study schedule that will resulting to unsuccessful outcome in their carrier education. The most of the student acquire bad attitude from their intimate partners from the play ground, impacting their personal behavior
It is sensible to conclude that, the student participating in sporting activities could enhance their knowledge, on the other hand affecting their carrier education. However, it reliance on individual circumstances to participate in sporting activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63414634146 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81900823977 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1275053001 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102747207194 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499206597088 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286956686202 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699304203284 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229426400081 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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