Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the internet has developed which led to abandon the free bookstore. I strongly agree with the idea of getting the information and book by using google because it saves time and effort and also I can find any information about any topic quickly and easily.
Most of students are struggling with their time and they want to learn about anything as fast as they can without any hard effort. The students are bad at time management so they cannot spend the whole day to go to libraries in order to get one idea who is looking for as well as going outside will cost him much more effort and even much more money. For instance, going to the central library in Baghdad costs a student who lives in another province more than 25,000 IQ Dinar beside the physical effort.
Furthermore, it is so simple to open the laptop and looking for any book, idea, information by using the internet. The student may take a seconds to get his aim and satisfy with his result rather than going out and open many book and folders to search for a single data. For example, Last day my teacher has shown us many books and article in just few minutes by using the search browser.
In conclusion, the internet has affected on the number of visitors in the modern time. I totally agree that surfing the net is easier and comfortable for many people to get what they want.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-04-24 | berfincakin | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the students') or simply say ''Most students''.
Suggestion: Most of the students; Most students
...n about any topic quickly and easily. Most of students are struggling with their time and they...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a second' or simply 'seconds'?
Suggestion: a second; seconds
...sing the internet. The student may take a seconds to get his aim and satisfy with his res...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'many books'.
Suggestion: many books
...s result rather than going out and open many book and folders to search for a single data...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51807228916 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25797833333 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7497305381 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701698559338 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352470425086 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03245706668 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536982605189 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342237798711 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.