Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
do you think being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Celebrities are the role model for most of us. Therefore, in order to be a celebrity you must be particularly ideal. A well known conception, is that a star can have everything in life, aiming to the extensive use of connection facilities all over the world, VIP’s life has been more vulnerable and in particular, under microscope.
Being a celebrity, either a film or sports star, has its own dark sides bright ones. It also requires you to seek for perfection, either in your behavior or the content you’re sharing with audience. because you’re not only being watched with adults, but teenagers and children.
Starting with how beneficial is being a star, everyone is seeking your a companion, you will always get a special treatment, your name is always considered wherever you go, increasing number of people would like to take a photograph with you. Adding to this, receiving daily offers from reputable foundations that would love to include you in, advertisements and TV shows, or perform in plays and movies that will definitely brings you life welfare and privilege.
In the other hand, you will be facing numerous side effects, being a vip personality brings you troubles more than being beneficial. Starting with some strangers interfering with you personal life as if you’re a public property. For example, mohamed salah; the public sports figure, who has just posted a photo wearing (moana costume), celebrating his daughter’s birthday, he received thousands of negative, hateful and abusive feedbacks for dressing like this.
In conclusion, being a well-know figure is not easily thing to deal with, as it might sound very unique and magnificent, but inside out, it is stressful and commonly irrelevant.
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| 2019-11-27 | Moustafa Nofale | 84 | view |
| 2019-11-27 | Moustafa Nofale | 84 | view |
| 2019-11-27 | Moustafa Nofale | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...tent you're sharing with audience. because you're not only being watched with...
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Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'trouble'
Suggestion: trouble
...cts, being a vip personality brings you troubles more than being beneficial. Starting wi...
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Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...y thing to deal with, as it might sound very unique and magnificent, but inside out, it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26690391459 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94416835513 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658362989324 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1176983855 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286991186529 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1111041892 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076139166195 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15292049626 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612053361383 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.