Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, there are a lot of factors which have a direct relationship with communication. In the world that we have live in it, technology has significant role in families’ life, on of a technology is TV, which more experts believe that has positive influence on society. However, others stand on the other side of the continuum, believing that television has a negative effect on people. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former prospective. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated hereunder.
To begin with, daily news is the important part of a telecast, which announces the news of whole the world. This event cause people have a lot of information about everything. When people have a data about different issues can talk together about them in a different places such as restaurant, park, street and etc. an example can drive this fact and notion home. Last week I heard about a bombing in north Canada. This news was the wonderful for me and I wanted to speak about that with my brother. Therefore, I saw my brother after hours and I Called him to talk about a thing which I heard before hours. As you can see, a simple event that shows in the TV can help to people have a great time together.
Secondly, Television in during day shows a variety of movies likewise comedy movie, action movie, romantic movie and etc. these movies can people have a different emotions and then their emotion's causes a they have various behaviors. For instance, when I see the comedy movie I have a good feel because more laughing releases my negative energy from my body. When this event happen I have a power to talk to people for hours. Actually the comedy movie causes me have a calm mental, therefore I can focus on the speeches of the people that want talk to me. This Example demonstrates television can influence on behavior people and consequently, suitable behavior makes a condition for people talk together about everything.
In sum, having all reasons and examples into account, I believe that TV stimulates people which to have a strong communication, because TV programs get the people many data about everything which happen in the world and because television shows a movies which impact on the communication's people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...edy movie, action movie, romantic movie and etc. these movies can people have a differen...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'they'?
Suggestion: a; they
...emotions and then their emotions causes a they have various behaviors. For instance, w...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a movie' or simply 'movies'?
Suggestion: a movie; movies
... the world and because television shows a movies which impact on the communications peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83762886598 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76778205318 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492268041237 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6322748052 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675039212106 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248438187767 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267526778132 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515388656109 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216805962705 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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