do you agree or disagree with the following statements? because modern life in very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.
Nowadays, life becomes more intricate, and most people connected as social media become common in society. Therefore, everyone has more scheduled plan to do every day. As Abraham Lincoln said to have more successful, we should sharpen our axe more every day.
First, the ability to plan and organize help ready for an unscheduled problem.
For example, every year, the strategy department, in our company, plan for next year. Suddenly in this September, the unpredicted things happened, we couldn't get a loan from our bank, therefore; our company could go bankrupt.
but we predict this scenario, and we have a plan B, So we survive from that catastrophe.
Second, organized people have the best performance among others.
Statistics show that if you organize your time during weekends, and weekdays, you probably among the most productive person in the world. Because the time management ability and prioritize your most important job will stand out you among your colleges and organize your mental disability or solve your forgetfulness problem.
these skills aren't an easy thing to do, but as I mention, have a lot of outcomes.
Finally, organizing helps you to concentrate on your most important job.
Today, we distract easily by social media like Instagram, Facebook and Twitter.
Also, sad news has a severe effect on our sentiments. After that, we couldn't work, or we prefer to speak with our friends or do other tasks.
However, if we have a plan to do every day to reach our goals, we may not distract by social media. therefore, we can do our goals and manage our resources.
To sum up, life becomes more complicated during these ages, the most productive persons between us are who can organize their work.
can you ignore this?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63077665669 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7487539126 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1052631579 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151450022187 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533421146398 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322701482798 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568790345843 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271819754185 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.