You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain the situation
• Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a frequent customer and member of your platinum shopping club. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service of your company Amazon.com. I purchased camera from your website on 22nd of November.
The camera I bought is Nikon security camera with rain shade. When I collected the item, I was glad that it reached exact on time and I eagerly opened it. However, I quickly noticed that there is not only a crack on front lens but also the rain shade is not fit on it.
I called your customer service department a week ago and as per your representative instructions I logged the returned request. After this process, he reassured that I would receive a repaired camera and shade within 2 days. It is extremely disappointing that I haven’t had any communication with them since then.
Because of this camera I had canceled may trip to Goa and all my holidays are wasted. I would like to request an immediate repair/ replacement for the camera. Furthermore, I would appreciate an apology and appropriate compensation for the inconvenience caused to me.
I look forward to your prompt reply,
Yours Sincerely,
Aman.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the service of your company Amazon.com. I purchased camera from your website on 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00091813315 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.9878661417 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6923076923 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185885519109 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639122961606 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540080248609 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896631184629 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318940771102 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.