Buying things on the Internet is becoming more and more popular than traditional methods. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are shopping online rather than going to a traditional market. However, whether people should buy things on the Internet is a controversial issue. My view is that purchasing on websites always outweigh the traditional methods.
First, it is convenience for most individuals who seeks out items in oversea. This means that instead of flying to abroad, you could sit at home and make your purchases at anytime of day or night after just few clicks. Also, you can buy any merchandise which is not available in your country and made in the original nation.
The other advantage is that internet markets have a great number of dealers included at home and abroad, the price of products which they sell are often constantly competitive.
So, buying things on Internet is becoming more and more popular by degrees.
On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantage of its. The main trouble is its risky. If you go to a little known website, you might unintentionally leak your credit card details and hackers could steal your money. A further disadvantage is that you must have to wait delivery even your order could delivery to misplace. This sometimes will be a challenge with your patience.
In conclusion, the major function of market is trading goods. No matter where it is. So, with the developments of modern technologies and the benefits of shopping online outweigh the disbenefits, purchasing on the internet will soon dominate all transactions in market all over the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03529411765 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79402889436 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4769269619 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252829470417 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727325161534 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111487293044 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147307605206 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156647759974 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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