You had a dinner with your friends family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should say :-
what you enjoyed at the dinner?
describe how you feel about his/her family
invite your friend and his family to your place.
Dear Thomas,
I hope you are doing well. I remember the first time when we became good friends, although it was an ugly moment for both of us, but since then my journey at university has smoothened. I am writing this letter to express my joy over last week’s dinner with your family.
There have been so many elements about the dinner that I still cannot take out of my head. I must not forget to mention what a gala time I had at your place. Starting from your dining hall, it gave me such a warm and cozy feeling in this freezing weather, as I am experiencing this extreme form for the first time. I am going to copy the idea of your dining hall‘s lighting for sure. They so beautifully gleamed every corner of the room and made antiques look very unique. The classical Indian music that you played created such a pleasing environment. I appreciate you remember my taste in music. I regret to end this list, but, the food your family prepared for me was mouth-watering specially the Canadian desert your father baked for me. The red wine was icing on the cake as I have always been fond of this brand. I feel really blessed to have find such a great friend in foreign land.
Being an immigrant, I really miss my family parties, as in Indian culture we have the culture of mixing up more with our near ones. Your parents were very supportive of the fact that I belonged to a very different culture and country. Also, knowing the fact, they mingled up so well with me. Infact, they seems so happy to have me over for dinner. They made me very comfortable as initially I looked very nervous as stated by them. I am so over-whelmed with your family’s kind and loving gesture
I won’t say, as a matter of returning favours, but I genuinely want you to join my family for the New Year’s Eve. I know this is a special occasion in your culture. Therefore, I would certainly give you the best evening. We will have bonfire, jazz and rock music, the Canadian delicacies, wine and not to miss long sessions of gossips at my place. My parents are also visiting me on the same occasion. I hope it would be great fun.
I am eagerly waiting for the day as it would be my turn to show my love towards you.
Best Wishes
Udita.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y journey at university has smoothened. I am writing this letter to express my jo...
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Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...rner of the room and made antiques look very unique. The classical Indian music that you pl...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 606, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret ending'.
Suggestion: regret ending
...ciate you remember my taste in music. I regret to end this list, but, the food your family pr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 855, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...is brand. I feel really blessed to have find such a great friend in foreign land. ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 306, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ingled up so well with me. Infact, they seems so happy to have me over for dinner. Th...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 125, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my family for the New Year's Eve. I know this is a special occasion in your...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 32.9175257732 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 937.175257732 198% => OK
No of words: 415.0 206.0 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46987951807 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46095242418 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 127.690721649 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563855421687 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 290.88556701 200% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.13402061856 252% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 12.6804123711 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4985903003 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3461538462 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9615384615 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 7.41237113402 310% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252209439333 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657512843978 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598717157096 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137436627293 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677802923235 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.