Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It’s argued that today’s we have a lot of choose, in my opinion we have a lot of opportunities to choose in compare to past.
People in the past do not have many choices, people were agriculture or employee so they went to school to learn how to Wright or maybe they be employed when their finished their education. But most of them went to farm and continued their father’s job or if there were lucky they could go to factories. They could travel harder than these days and shopping just around themselves and communicate with some people and after inventing telephone, they can communicate with people from around the world.
In these days people have a lot of choice, we have many improve in knowledge and technology .so people can easily choose what they want. Scientists work in different area of specialization and our knowledge improve more than before .for example internet is the most important one and change the world to a global village. People can communicate with other and learn more about different cultures and civilizations. By using technology people be more creative and know how to illustrate their talent and skills. They have more freedom to demonstrate the truth through world wild. People can develop their ideas and attitude by using information that is available for you. we go to globalization and in my opinion all of these changes make a lot of choice for us and we can decide how to live.
In conclusion, I believe that advance in knowledge and technology make a better choice to us to have a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85820895522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7494987291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1963064915 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213964320238 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774523462977 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572907002387 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11799262415 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033677295325 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.