1.1 Who is your favourite celebrity in Vietnam?
I would like to talk about my favourite Vietnamese celebrity, who is an influencer on my mind because of her unending perseverance, it is Minh Hang, who used to win an HTV and Mai Vang awards.
She has gained a reputation for herself for both being talented and being a dedicated daughter and older sister in the family. She was born into an unhappy family. However, she overcame all the difficulties becoming one of the most successful singer and actress. She is a typical example of a strong, intelligent and independent woman.
She is recognized by the audience as a versatile artist with many roles as singer, actress, MC, brand ambassador, film producer.
In conclusion, Minh Hang is forever my beloved idol, and her effort is the goal for me to never quit trying.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81343283582 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82682193539 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708955223881 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2890940605 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0194390597222 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00597545634024 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146368190139 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0104570485954 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181121394645 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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