Some people argue that fashion itemes cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The high cost of fashion itemes is the most contrivercial topic nowadays. People are sepreat around this conspt. Some support purchasing a high end fashion brands, while others disagree with the the need to axcept that fashion is a nessecety of life. The essay is an overview of both sides with a brife of my personal view.
High-end fashion consumers belive that fashion is an expresion of someone's life. despite the price tag cost, they value the peace and its quality. They even related brands to something special in there life, such as weeding, birthday and so on. For example: a weeding ring from Tiffany, or a designer bag as a birthday gift from Gucce. Other than that, they commit to pricey items as a lifestyle even if they were finincialy struggling. They rely on their fashion tast as a self-expreesion. Which is pretty extreme.
on the other hand, some people prefer the obesite. an affordable brands. it's save a lot of money and give them a room to maintain a healthy habit which is overdose shopping. also the market is filled with an handy alternatives for example: Forever21 and Primark. Which is pretty convienate.
Overall, Pricey fashion is a personal choice. But it moght turn to an obssion and that is an acceptable. Investing in budget-friendly brands can save you money along with finding you discered fashion sense
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91703056769 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6867147144 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4530882131 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2631578947 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0526315789 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285010699326 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774026976201 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585630470141 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166172555174 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661188918602 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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