The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?
The United Nations commemorated recently it 70th birthday. This essay will discuss both questions, if the UN has it brought benefits during this time and whether it will last another 70 years, providing my overall opinion.
Since the end of the World War II, the United Nations have been taking care of our world, the most of the time in a positive way. It was the entrance gate for many countries underdeveloped to receive economic help likewise international recognition. In addition, any member of the organization have to accomplish certain requirements such as human rights, which made that many countries like mine, Spain, access to a Marshall Plan, in the middle fifties of the 20th century.
In regards with the second question it is difficult to guarantee another 70 years of the UN. Unfortunately, every day the role of the United Nations is more questioned by some countries, like United States of America. The Trump administration have criticised hardly the role of the organization the last years, which made it to limited their budget contribution to some important programs for the UNESCO.
In conclusion, there is a positive background after this 70 years but an uncertain future. In my opinion, UN has been a great initiative that made the world a better place to live for many people, which is a good reason to keep it between us. If there were no UN, someone would have to invented.
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Suggestion:
...with the second question it is difficult to guarantee another 70 years of the UN....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96638655462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8384117841 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2214928801 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274575159916 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100750632533 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102252585476 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179512911684 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155940474431 0.056905535591 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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