In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?
Young adults are keen to have more company with their cronies than their parents nowadays.This leads a drastic change in bonding with their family because they get less care from their parents and consequently they tend to be forced rather parents give them proper primary education.
a huge portion of youths who are at college and universities they do not get much chance to get closer to their parents because Parents are often busy with their career.Moreover,they tend to forget taking care of their offsprings what leads them involve with outsiders much.For example, a study found that most sleepovers tendency is happening rapidly on teenagers and lessening their interest to stay home where about 76% young adults stated that they do not feel comfortable at home.
Parents are not supposed to be threatening their childs to be at home always.Instead they make the home more interesting.They have to understand the emotions of adolescents despite being busy in other works. Moreover, if youths are constrained from going outside and passing time with their cronies, it will lead a very unhealthy life style which is producing an imbalanced career for them.For getting back their attention to home, parents should make their home more interesting and spending time together at weekends which enhance the boundary of love for family.
In conclusion, Although there is must stay one of parents at home for taking proper care of youngsters, to afford a better life style both needed to be involved in jobs what causes isolation between family members. Juvenile should be propelled to explore and to learn how to walk independently from childhood but excessive passing time with friends are sometimes wasting their valuable time and parents should concern their childs and give them priority first to be an important one of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18456375839 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76157167127 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.228526305 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 257.5 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6666666667 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41117848182 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213102291519 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961152904566 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270003741413 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504692714302 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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