You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• Give details of your visit to the restaurant
• Explain the reason for the celebration
• Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Manager,
I am writing this mail in regards to my recent visit to your hotel Hyatt to celebrate my 18th birthday on 18th April with my friends. I must say, it was the best food I ever had in any restaurant.
it was my first birthday after my wedding in my new city Pune and we heard a lot about your restaurant on the radio. so I decided with my friends to give a try to your hotel and we were delighted to have a special meal with a complimentary cake.
I would like to include that Butter chicken was a favourite of everyone in complete course. also, it was quite surprised with the quantity related to price, as we were expected to have only 2 legs though it come with 4 leg piece which made our meal pocket-friendly for us. also, the staff was so generous and helped us in serving the food and last but not least, they showed up to wish me birthday made my day.
I look forward to more dinning in your restaurant.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing this mail in regards to my ...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r Manager, I am writing this mail in regards to my recent visit to your hotel Hyatt to ...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...best food I ever had in any restaurant. it was my first birthday after my weddin...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d I ever had in any restaurant. it was my first birthday after my wedding ...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...lot about your restaurant on the radio. so I decided with my friends to give a try...
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Line 15, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...vourite of everyone in complete course. also, it was quite surprised with the quanti...
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Line 15, column 208, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
... expected to have only 2 legs though it come with 4 leg piece which made our meal po...
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Line 15, column 224, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'piece' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pieces'.
Suggestion: pieces
...e only 2 legs though it come with 4 leg piece which made our meal pocket-friendly for...
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Line 23, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your restaurant. Yours faithfully, A Kansal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36612021858 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48465084119 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6665371664 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178782966683 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739336502074 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054106075699 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977450269717 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488400529596 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.