A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernising. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Many people often believe that foreign country should help poorer nations by focusing on infrastructure as the main priority to boost the development of those countries. While I believe it is necessary for some specific situations, I would disagree with this argument because this would not solve the problem in long-tem in such poverty regions.
Firstly, people are the vital element that could affect the future one country might have. Especially in poor countries where income of one person usually could not offset his cost of living, this model would be applied to the national majority and reflected into the stagnant economy of these regions. Since government received support from another country, they should focus on how to improve the citizen’s living condition. For example, higher authority could provide sufficient food and clothing to make sure the harsh life would not bother its citizen, which make them turn into another purposes instead of what to do to survive in daily life.
Secondly, it is essential that these foreign aid could be distributed into the education system of under-developed countries, where the residents could receive useful knowledge. Since people have more knowledge, they could demonstrate better in their work, which in turn create more profit to the company. At a result, the economy of country might increase in long-term
In conclusion, receiving support from foreign country is a helpful practice. Any organization that response for this task should consider carefully to make sure the aid are effective to the future of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33864541833 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6792465822 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0257607229 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233402539083 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855470374126 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416360097824 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14259628123 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045024308942 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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