some people believe the range of technology available to individual today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people.other think it is having an opposite effect.Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is unquestionalbe true that in couple of years technology is swift nor mushrooming day by day whereas everybody has consuming technology in their work but many people say that in few days rich man either poverty people causing the gap or other consider that it could an outside influences.I will discuss both views so i will give my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
First of all,there are mainfold reasons.There most predominant adolescent have consumed technology regarding their work.Therefore, rich and poor individual everlasting use on social sites promoting their business as well as today youngster are very active on internet even i think technology decline gap between poor and rich person.Hence,education is third to see to of human being life than youth have well educated as far as they must not effect people have belong which background like vulnerable family and marvellous the standing of living because utilise should judge in their work or smart,diligent and obligation.
Moving towards,there are no denying the fact that, authorition might always providing jobs equal to poor and rich people in their fields.Furthermore, juvenile must easily making
their friend online without any think who are poor or rich.Eventually,today people do not narrow mind nor they have open minded.Thus, I think technology have declining gap between high status people or poverty people.
All said and done,i reckon government should want to giving job similar for poor and rich people.As a result, education can change every thing in whole life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, third, thus, well, whereas, as to, i reckon, i think, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41056910569 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26416235131 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.745286509 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 332.75 106.682146367 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.25 7.06120827912 542% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346115761004 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189343156536 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065739727827 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174319594234 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080476123295 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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