Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say:
• What is your motivation to learn a new language?
• How can the teacher help you?
• When will you be ready to start?
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in learning the French language from you as my mentor has recommended that you are the best teacher and has given me the contact details.
I work in a multi-national company McKinsey at the post of relationship development and have to travel to Paris next month for a business meeting. My mentor has suggested me to take a French language course from you as it will help in enhancing my career prospects. Moreover, it will not only help me in communicating easily in Paris but will also assist me in writing the meeting report in French.
I hope you can assist me in reading, writing and speaking this language in an easier way, so that I can have a command over the language. I am very confident that your help will help me in in acquiring the knowledge of French language and grammar
I would like to start with my classes from next week as this week I am busy with work in my office. I hope you will be able to start my classes in the evening from 5 pm to 6 pm next week.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...y confident that your help will help me in in acquiring the knowledge of French langu...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...knowledge of French language and grammar I would like to start with my classes fr...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ledge of French language and grammar I would like to start with my classes fro...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... week I am busy with work in my office. I hope you will be able to start my class...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... evening from 5 pm to 6 pm next week. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40476190476 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58869424005 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519047619048 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7837570237 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21320653439 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963079755025 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877392935928 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132431317084 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108596368657 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.