Last Monday you flew from Mumbai to Bangalore. When you reached home, you discovered that you had left your hand bang on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter you have to explain:
Where and when you lost the bag
What your bag looks like
What its contents were
Respected Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request you that I have lost my handbag in the plane last week where I was traveling from Mumbai to Bangalore. After I reached my home, I encountered my wallet has been missing which I kept inside the Laptop bag. I remember when I was waiting for a connection flight at Kolkata airport, that's where I had missed my handbag. Because i was rushing to catch the next flght in that time i had coffee in the Madras Coffee House which is located exactly right behind the Book Stall. I will detail how my handbag will be. It is made up of thick leather which is extravagant and it is the black color with stripes in the middle. Moreover, I got this as a gift from one of my friends before I got into the flight. In addition to that, it has my international driving license, unique identification number and also my credit cards which i using it for managing my monthly expenses. So I strongly urge you to take neccessary action and take forward it to the corresponding officers as soon as possible. This would really help me to avoid applying duplicate kinds of stuff. However, it was my mistake but I assure you this would not happen again in future.
Your's Obediently,
Abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...a connection flight at Kolkata airport, thats where I had missed my handbag. Because ...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t, thats where I had missed my handbag. Because i was rushing to catch the next flght i...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... where I had missed my handbag. Because i was rushing to catch the next flght in ...
^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng to catch the next flght in that time i had coffee in the Madras Coffee House w...
^
Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...n number and also my credit cards which i using it for managing my monthly expens...
^
Line 3, column 1151, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... assure you this would not happen again in future. Yours Obediently, Abc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49321266968 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61102048644 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2479453807 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158557973643 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582932327648 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709859181995 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702787828529 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702787828529 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.