More and more information about the lives of celebrities I'd found in newspapers, magazines and online. Why is this happening? What are the disadvantages for the reading public?
At present society,all the Newspapers,magazines and mobile internet has huge information about the basic routine needs as well as life of the celebrities. This is happening due to people are showing more interest towards celebrities so to increase their trp or price this is how they are using famous persons. In some cases this might become disadvantage to the students for them to reach goals.
Firstly,the people who are living in the world, among them 90% of them are more attracted towards top celebrities and they usually follow them in social websites like Instagram and Facebook etc. If anything happens to their family or to that particular famous person then it will be telecasted for a while in television channels and also it is written in newspaper in the front pages only bcz to increase their prices. These above are some of the best examples and these are happening for their own business benefits of products.
The main disadvantages caused due to this are losing the humanity,social awareness also decreasing in the current society.the best example is students who are studying they are not much interested in their studies or current society what is happening in the world though they show more attention towards movies,top lists persons etc. In this way the students are losing their memory power and also neglecting the studies become worst. The worst thing happening is the peoples are losing themself by doing all unnecessary things.
In conclusion, though the magazines, newspapers provides information about celebrities some stories of people are inspiring us about in each situation in life,it means some of them struggled to become a populated person,so sometimes it's better to know about the lives of celebrity. The public should accept positivity of strugglence and should leave negativity and in few cases we inspire by seeing them.
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| 2019-12-13 | VEJENDLA MOUNIKA | 74 | view |
- SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS MORE BENEFICIAL TO TAKE PART IN SPORTS WHICH ARE PLAYED IN TEAMS, LIKE FOOTBALL,WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT TAKING PAR IN INDIVIDUAL SPORTS, LIKE TENNIS(OR)SWIMMING, IS BETTER. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION. 67
- More and more information about the lives of celebrities I d found in newspapers magazines and online Why is this happening What are the disadvantages for the reading public 74
- SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS MORE BENEFICIAL TO TAKE PART IN SPORTS WHICH ARE PLAYED IN TEAMS, LIKE FOOTBALL,WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT TAKING PAR IN INDIVIDUAL SPORTS, LIKE TENNIS(OR)SWIMMING, IS BETTER. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION. 56
- INDIVIDUALS CAN DO NOTHING TO IMPROVE THE ENVIRONMENT, ONLY GOVERNMENTS AND LARGE COMPANIES CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18811881188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86792793143 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8722199801 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24334074089 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832417154007 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436334038232 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146380889711 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636733910952 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.