There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, Describe
1. What the problems are?
2. Explain how these problems are affecting you
3. What would you like the company do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a pass holder passenger of your bus company and a Platinum bus club member. I am writing to complain about the bus which I take daily from sector 17 to Zirakpur.
The bus I took having a route number 212. Not only, the bus is always late in the morning by 15 minute but also in evening it is full of crowd. Therefore, some people complaint is that their valuable items are missing.
These problems are affecting my performance in the office. Because I always late for office and my boss humiliate me in front of the all my colleagues. So, I cannot focus on my work and it cans my career. Moreover, someone snitches my vault in the bus in evening and I lost my documents and also some cash.
If you allow me then I would like to suggest you some solutions. Could you please install GPS system and CCTV cameras in all your buses to track the location? If you do so then, the driver definitely follow their time tables accordingly. Further, CCTV cameras are helpful to find the person who snitches the personal belongings of passengers. I would appreciate if you take immediate action on these problems.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t my documents and also some cash. If you allow me then I would like to sugge...
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Line 15, column 309, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...ful to find the person who snitches the personal belongings of passengers. I would appreciate if yo...
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Line 23, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Yours sincerely, Amanpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66203703704 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54950555334 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6457415564 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.9375 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141830084265 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472108334404 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531432174041 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672018743037 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475850026398 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.