Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Traveling by air becomes more popular nowadays because of comforts and less spending time. However,when economical air travel come into sight people and their views divided into two,one side is against,but second in favour of and think that it has many benefits. This controversial topic has advantages and dissadvantages and in this essay we will review both of them.
On one hand,traveling to different countries can have an impact to overpopulation. It is not a secret that overpopulation is one of the global problem now and many people regard it as effect of many types of pollution. The more people live in country the more they harm environment. If everything continue to happen in the same way,in forseable future our planet will be at serious risk.
On the other hand,there are many positive sides of this statement. For instance,it is really good when there is no borders between some countries and people can easily move from one place to another. However,it will have an impact on international relationship. Relationship not only among population,but also between governmental representatives and because of that there is a strong possibility that we will not have political conflicts.
To conclude,I'm of opinion that there are more benefits than negative effects because of more opportunities which people will have. I totally agree with the side of people who want to develop economical air traveling in the future.
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- Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people belive that the advent of economical air travel has been very benefitial by making international travel more accessible,while other argue that it has a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, so, for instance, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22077922078 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1267340722 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9520719487 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195431164058 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683104555156 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489328139712 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123939117355 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519206642722 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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