We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In present time, people are becoming excessively reliant on computers. They are used in varied areas such as organisations, health care centres and for flying aircraft. In future there will be progressive application of computers. In my opinion, I believe that this over-reliance on computers has a positive impact on the society.
Computers has made the lives of people simple and easy. It is used in wide variety of application like for calculating complex mathematics problems, and for data storage. Business, hospitals and crime detection cannot be carried out without the help of computers. In future, computers will be used by various institutes and coaching centres to provide online education to students so that they do not have to waste their time in traveling. Moreover, computers have made possible communication among people living in different geographical locations and different time zones. It has made the world a smaller place and not only people can interact with their loved ones but also business meetings and conference can take place at any time and from any place. To exemplify, students can now simply log in to the websites of colleges on computers and start their study.
The inordinate use of computers will bring innumerable benefits to people and community. Computers has made possible to do complex calculation in a blink of an eye which is not possible for a human to do. Moreover, it is easier to store data and files in the computer and thus occupy less shelf space rather than hardcopies of papers which are difficult to manage and accumulate. Furthermore, computers are becoming a basic necessity for working people as well as housewives as it provides solutions to all the problems such as setting reminders, preparing presentations, using as a diary to write down the experiences and important notes. To elucidate, according to the recent report more that 50 percent of the duties in offices and at homes are done by computers.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the computers are an important part in a human life and people cannot think of doing even a menial task without the help of computers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ried out without the help of computers. In future, computers will be used by various inst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89827204527 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2421485251 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.529411765 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203631166444 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706483061099 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581922794926 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128054322389 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060280406183 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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