Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend? What punishment methods should be used, in your opinion?
In contemporary days, there has been a dramatic upsurge in crime rate which is primarily concerned with youngsters. The main causative factors for this trend are the hectic life-style of parents and inflation. In my opinion, this grave problem can be deterred by re-adapting conventional ways of upbringing for children and subsidized offering of job-specific skill-set training by the administration. The best reprimand for these juvenile criminals would be to judicially enrollment for volunteering work for social causes and rehabilitation programs by the government.
To start with the origin of this issue, parents these days are extremely occupied with their daily job routine and hardly get time to spend with their offsprings. As a result, these children fall prey to criminal gangs and their activities in the search of attention and mental support. In this process, they usually become susceptible to evils of society and end-up following their footsteps. An escalated use of drugs amongst youngsters these days is an ideal example of such an event. In order to prevent children from such felonious activities, parents should spend a certain amount of quality time with them and discuss their thoughts, routine problems and do some recreational activities, which would undoubtedly give them confidence and being loved to make them feel important.
Furthermore, it is a lawmaker's responsibility to provide employment opportunities to troubled youngsters by organizing free of cost training and courses specific to the occupation. This way, they do not have to look for an illegal way of earning money for their livelihood. To exemplify this, The prime minister of India, Mr. Modi, has recently initiated a 'youth development program' where needy youngsters are being taught skills necessary to acquire several job prospects.
To conclude, although the number of young offenders has augmented exponentially in recent days due to certain reasons, however, this can be tackled by the parent's guidance and government's support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5127388535 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04210149674 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0896730524 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.153846154 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954004852532 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345016187321 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279667619986 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061660613911 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289703321091 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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