Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money
How might having a lot of money make people happy？
What other things in life can make people happy?
Money is the necessity for everyone in order to fulfill material requirements in daily life. Some people have define the money is the source of happiness and they believe that obtain enough wealth could purchase everything including happiness. Even”More money more happiness”become the motto of someone , but if only money can bring happiness or what something else could be?
Indeed, people use money to buy specious house and limousine which can fulfill their material life. Moreover, the well-off family can hire nanny and house keeper to take care of their children or serve them. It is true that if someone own great amount of wealth can make life easy and comfort even luxurious.but there are great deal of other things which can also make people happy as well
Beside, people who endeavor to earn money always spend less time to company with family due to overwork and miss the chance to be with their kids. However,there are many ways which could make people happy rather than money. For instance, people who willing to help others always feel happy, and some celebrities always donate their money and time to do the volunteering activities to contribute to our society to change back the happiness and calm in their deep mind.
The nature of happiness and well being of people is complex and difficult to tell. But it is true that the money is absolutely not the only way can bring happiness. We need to open our mind and to find out what kind of happiness and well being is really worth to pursuit of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'defined'.
Suggestion: defined
...rements in daily life. Some people have define the money is the source of happiness an...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ppiness'become the motto of someone , but if only money can bring happiness o...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...fort even luxurious.but there are great deal of other things which can also make peo...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...he chance to be with their kids. However,there are many ways which could make people h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for instance, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86259541985 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57493346553 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7929490565 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434774902274 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163837402094 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823511239711 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258216143539 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284417469512 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.