You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
HELLO, HOW ARE YOU? I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO UPDATE YOU ABOUT SOME CHANGES THAT HAVE OCCURRED IN MY WORK LIFE. YOU WILL BE GLAD TO KNOW THAT I HAVE JOINED TECH MAHINDRA LAST WEEK AND RESIGNED FROM THE OLDER JOB.
AS YOU MAYBE AWARE, THAT I HAD BEEN WORKING IN THE PREVIOUS COMPANY SINCE 2 YEARS. I HAD RECENTLY REALISED THAT THERE WAS NO LONGER ANYTHING NEW TO LEARN FROM THERE AND I NEEDED AN UPGRADATION. THEREFORE, I APPLIED IN SOME OTHER ORGANISATION AND WAS FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO BE PLACED IN ONE OF THEM.
I HAVE BEEN ASSIGNED AS A GENERAL MANAGER IN MY NEW PROFILE. SO, I HAVE BEEN PROMOTED TO ONE LEVEL HIGHER THAN MY PREVIOUS ONE. MOREOVER, I AM ALSO EXPECTING TO GET A MAJOR HIKE IN MY UPDATED SALARY AS WELL.I WISH YOU COULD BE HERE WITH ME TO CELEBRATE THIS ACHIEVEMENT.
LASTLY, YOU WILL BE SURPRISED TO KNOW THAT MY SISTER GOT ENGAGED LAST WEEK. HIS FIANCE IS AN ELECTRICAL ENGINEER AND IS EAGERLY WAITING TO MEET YOU. WE ARE PLANNING TO ORGANISE AN ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY SHORTLY. WILL SURELY INFORM YOU ABOUT THE SAME. HOPING TO SEE YOU SOON.
REGARDS
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| 2020-01-12 | Prabhjot Kaur 1991 | 70 | view |
| 2019-12-19 | PALAK AHUJA | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | Prabhp | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | Prabhp | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | Prabhp | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...HAD BEEN WORKING IN THE PREVIOUS COMPANY SINCE 2 YEARS. I HAD RECENTLY REALISED T...
^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...MAJOR HIKE IN MY UPDATED SALARY AS WELL.I WISH YOU COULD BE HERE WITH ME TO CELEB...
^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...SISTER GOT ENGAGED LAST WEEK. HIS FIANCE IS AN ELECTRICAL ENGINEER AND IS EAGERLY...
^^
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...RM YOU ABOUT THE SAME. HOPING TO SEE YOU SOON. REGARDS
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48223350254 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42125062422 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8106036867 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0714285714 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218995728329 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801097075456 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441791006906 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135056234021 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565921836265 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.