the diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
The diagram depicts the life cycle of a honey bee. A quick look at the diagram reveals that a honey bee goes through a cycle of 34-36 days with seven stages to grow from an egg to an adult. The process begins with the bee laying eggs and end with it reaching full maturity.
The life cycle begins with the female bees laying typically one or two eggs every three days. Each egg will then hatch after normally nine to ten days, from which a nymph is born. Subsequently, during its growth of 21 days, divided into three stages of five, seven and nine days, this immature form of the honey bee will moult three times respectively. The size of the nymph will also increase after each time the skin is shed.
after the nymphs has completed its moults and grown to a certain size, a young adult of double size emerges. In the next four days, the young adult honey bee will grow to full maturity, where the life cycle repeats itself
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ase after each time the skin is shed. after the nymphs has completed its moults and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37572254335 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97802758755 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2377309736 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31266482128 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172371520227 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215348192337 0.0843802449381 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22817013927 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109402590853 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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