More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be solve this problem?
Owing to the human activities, there are several species of wild animals are struggling to survive. This issue lead to the verge of extinction. Simultaneously, the number of endangered animals are increasing day by day and struggle to losing natural habitat. On the bright side, there are certain measures that we can take to resolve the problems.
The main cause of extinction of the wild animals is the deforestation which is done to facilitate the development of urban areas. Due to this, the animals lose their natural habitat and this puts their lives at risk. Many of them are forced to wander into the villages for food. However, since they pose a threat to people's live and property, they often killed. Besides, excessive poaching is another reason for the extinction of animals. People killed it for the production of luxury goods such as leather bags, shoes, fur coats and ivory trade.
There are several measures that the government and the public can take to undo the damage done to wildlife. First and foremost, the government should launch nationwide campaigns to sensitive people about the importance of conserving the environment. In addition, there should be strict laws to prevent poaching. The media and the activists can also contribute bit and should discourage people from buying products made of animal fur.
In conclusion, human activities such as deforestation and mindless hunting are the major reason for the extinction of wildlife. Simultaneously, the government needs to enacting strict laws that stop or at lease reduce deforestation and poaching, wild animals can be saved from the brick of extinction
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18490566038 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81368774612 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2972038263 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231734954596 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690020967513 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479891478322 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132793066114 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044353423161 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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