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no i am disagree with this statement that says it is better to have broad knowledge of many academics subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. i think, being specialize in one specific subject is better because in that way we can do a specific work in best form of that. society need to very kind of work and persons that been specialist in their work. some jobs can not perform just by a little knowledge in their context. also some jobs need to hard work by body while some jobs are very motionless and do not need hard body work. so some knowledge in many subjects is good but it is not sufficient. in my mind some work with similar subjects and context and motion can complete each other so for doing those jobs in best form, knowing both of those is good and useful. any person have talent or ability in specific subject so that person can do that work related to his or her talent in best way and with great result and cosequence. in other hand some people with hard work are busy enough that do not have more time for doing other job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 199.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31155778894 5.08290768461 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16586995263 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3138176505 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0568690585876 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291500334491 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173540561703 0.0662205650399 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568690585876 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.2367328918 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 63.6247240618 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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