Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothing.
Do you agree or disagree ?
It's often believed by people that there are some individuals who can predict someone's customs and personality from the way they dress. I completely disagree with this statement and think that it is not possible to tell so.
First of all, people dress according to where they live. To elaborate more, it is hard to tell about a person’s background marley by the way they dress owing to the major influence done by the place of living. For example, immigrants can integrate into the society by changing the way of dressing without any change to their culture or personality. This example shows how dress code is not related to an individual's background. Thus, it is important to not relate the personal way of dressing to their culture and character.
Moreover, globalisation has a major effect on the way people dress. With this in mind, it has influenced many various aspects of our lives especially when it comes to our way of dressing. To give an example, many nations all over the world have to wear suits to work offices. We can interpret from this example that people all over the world dress in a similar fashion due to the globalization effect.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is almost impossible to accurately address someone’s background solely by judging their way of dress because the influence of the environment and globalization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99134199134 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87752144783 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0760642656 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161767503666 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652508987653 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503343702683 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106541654675 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608981577528 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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