Many people believe that exploiting animals by humans unethical. However, another group of people think that to satisfy needs such as food & research is acceptable
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since the inception of life on earth, human beings have been utilizing animals to meet their requirements and this has been a controversial topic. Whilst some opine that it is immoral to do so, I would completely agree with those who deem that this approach is acceptable. This essay will discuss both sides, and explain my belief that it is totally justifiable to use animals.
On one side, it is injustice to animals as their life is treated to be of less importance over humans’ life. Killing animals to enjoy a meal is a sinful act in many religions such as Hindu, and Buddhisim so should be avoided.
Additionally, they can feel pain when medical experiments are conducted on them unsuccessfully and eventually could die to life-threatening diseases. Risking non-human life to benefit from it is thus not acceptable.
Nevertheless, it is vital to consider the amount of progress in human disease prevention and food resources being done due to usage of animals. People could die early from illness, if animals were not used in scientific experiments to find the effective cures. Moreover, some animal products ,for instance, milk does not harm animals in fact society takes care of the animals which is beneficial to them as well in return. Undeniably, to maintain food-chain it is imperative to use animals otherwise human beings would die of starvation.
In conclusion, I completely concur as evident from above analysis that animals are quintessential to satiate numerous societal need. Even though others think due to religious beliefs and risks involved animals should not be eaten or used by researchers, it is crucial to do so as there is no alternative effective way to conduct research. Thus, since numerous lives have been saved due to contribution of animals in medical science and food it is agreeable to use them.
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- Many people believe that exploiting animals by humans unethical. However, another group of people think that to satisfy needs such as food & research is acceptableDiscuss both views and give your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97032895005 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9261793862 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150541867528 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514007539713 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270670985923 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768846776999 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411518867789 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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