The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrate unit of energy consumption in each year and prediction till 2030 in USA.
Overall,petrol and oil have highest trend of energy consumption and seemed continue till 2030. Whereas the nuclear,solar, wind and hydropower have always been inferior in consumption in both past and prediction.
Firstly ,it is clearly seemed that,beside some fluctuation in each year ,it was projected superior with nearly quadrillion units.While, coal surpasses natural gas with nearly 31 quadrillion unit.
On the other hand,the unit of consumption by nuclear,solar,wind,Hydropower were notice to have less than 5 quadrillion unit.Moreover, nuclear ,solar,wind will continue with slightly uplift after 2025.Futhermore hydropower stay at same unit of consumption likewise in 1980.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: illustrates
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...ediction till 2030 in USA. Overall,petrol and oil have highest trend of energy co...
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Suggestion: have the highest
...30 in USA. Overall,petrol and oil have highest trend of energy consumption and seemed...
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...have highest trend of energy consumption and seemed continue till 2030. Whereas ...
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Suggestion: , solar
...continue till 2030. Whereas the nuclear,solar, wind and hydropower have always been i...
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...and hydropower have always been inferior in consumption in both past and predict...
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... both past and prediction. Firstly ,it is clearly seemed that,beside some f...
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Suggestion: While
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... superior with nearly quadrillion units.While, coal surpasses natural gas with nearly...
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...quadrillion unit. On the other hand,the unit of consumption by nuclear,solar,w...
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...n the other hand,the unit of consumption by nuclear,solar,wind,Hydropower were no...
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...hand,the unit of consumption by nuclear,solar,wind,Hydropower were notice to have les...
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Line 13, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , Hydropower
...it of consumption by nuclear,solar,wind,Hydropower were notice to have less than 5 quadril...
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...e notice to have less than 5 quadrillion unit.Moreover, nuclear ,solar,wind will ...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...e to have less than 5 quadrillion unit.Moreover, nuclear ,solar,wind will continue with...
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Suggestion: ,
...an 5 quadrillion unit.Moreover, nuclear ,solar,wind will continue with slightly ...
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Suggestion: , wind
...adrillion unit.Moreover, nuclear ,solar,wind will continue with slightly uplift af...
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...opower stay at same unit of consumption likewise in 1980.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10714285714 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98017047566 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1570509375 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4 5.23603664747 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116965526562 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750895330481 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476558311803 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840956791224 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460817552412 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.45 11.4140731707 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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