The widespread use of the internet has a bad effect on people development.
What are the problems
Suggest some solution
I am convinced technology is being required in order to solve problems such as studies, business, other problems. However, it can be frequently seen that, many problems has been taken by the web utilisation. This essay intends to provides many of the concern behind this and also contribute some solid solutions to tackle this problem.
To embark on, people waste their most of the time on social media websites. Although social media apps used to get in touch with our dear ones regardless of the distance, it has more detrimental effects on the development of people future. Since masses tend to utilise such social websites in an inappropriate way, it can affect bad on building the future. For example, using social dark websites is not be beneficial for people because it has those crime work such as, drug delivery, congestion of girls or so on. So defiantly the social apps is being used in weird way.
Moreover, people cannot like to going at more palaces because of use of the internet. As information of culture places is being provided by the web, such places cannot be visited. Internet has more knowledge of majorities of places.
Although, there are a lot of reasons are responsible for this, still some solution can be able to mitigate this approach. Strict rules should be imparted by the authorities. Because the internet leads to this worlds, with some rules people must stop to over and hazard use of internet and those kind of rules should be made by governments such as availability of internet, close the dark websites or so on. Another solution of this about make more interest on visit more places as much as people can and because of that they can able to use the web in limited way. Even though the economy of nations would be raised, people may find more way to use the internet in a splendid way at that places with culture availability.
In conclusion, usages of websites people waste more time in the web and sometimes it is danger for their future, but still with some splendid solution masses can break the whole use of internet that I have been mentioned above.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-01 | Shivam patel | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80273972603 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53531114256 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3272199495 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236709996212 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785062408985 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493280171126 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135829170488 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307764166292 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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