A year ago, you became a member of your local film club. You have decided that you do not want to continue your membership for another year.Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letterstate what type of membership you have and how you have paid fo

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A year ago, you became a member of your local film club. You have decided that you do not want to continue your membership for another year.

Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter

state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details about the benefits you have had from being a member of the club explain why you have decided not to renew your membership Write at least 150 words.

Date: 4th jan 2020

Secretary

The film club

Subject: Application for not renew membership

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you about my membership update. it is platinum member, number :3265. I took this membership since one year back. All monthly fees and activities charges hapaid to bank, attached every deposit invoices.

Currently enjoying involvement with this club like discussion and sharing ideas with different media professionals, learning of camera playing & editing, therefore, I would like to say it was the great opportunity to watching international movies along with popular film makers.

However, I am going to shift my residence from X to Y from next month due to transfer order received from my employeer. For this reason unable to renew my membership from next month. this month will be last month to continue my membership in film club.

Request you please release my membership from 31st jan 2020 and give me clearance certificate.

Looking forward to hearing from you

Regards

Z

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51234567901 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8284404317 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697530864198 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9185448243 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17804995914 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782024096691 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613129584667 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101386559005 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045792272544 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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