Some people believe that people should retire at the age of 65. Whilst others believe that they should be allowed to work as long as they want to. What is your point of view? Discuss
Serving the nation is honor for someone.Their services should be acknowledge as they are working to national progress.According to many individual the retirement stage should be 65 few of them consider that age not the factor its their performance if they able to worked efficiently they can proceed their duties as long as they want.In am point of view they should retired at the age of 65.In this essay i will justify my View with example.
Institution are the main pillar in national development its play a vital role in countries progress. Institution are run under Human resourse. Human re souse capabilities make the department successful can learn all these skill as the get experience of doing certain work.its the reposibility of department to make policies and proceduce as strong as the dont depend upon on some individual.the prosedure are not depend upon some certainthat perticular persons for instant get injured whole process of worked get disturbed.that why i dicourage the this phenomena.furthermore at the elder age your temperament and energies are slow down this will lead your organization in some problems.
To culculde my statement we should respect their services and acknowledges their acheivement moreover they are role model for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29207920792 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27310095832 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.568251468 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.8 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.4 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286977987646 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108179409309 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134352187857 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17703891701 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133039021344 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.