Some people think that individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that some special people are born to be leaders, others consider leader skill is one that everyone can learnt. I would argue that there are some people born to be leaders, but everyone can be a leader if they were trained.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people believe that many individuals are born with special skills that allow them to be leaders. Firstly, different people are born to be distinctive, some are smart and some not. Smart people are easily able to be a leader than others. Secondly, individuals who are exceptionally talented would also find it easy to be
trusted by others. Therefore, they are obvious candidates for top positions in organizations.
On the other hand, I believe everyone can learn to become leaders. Firstly, communication skills, team-work skills, and problem-solving skills are essential skills to make a leader. Since those skills are not human instinct, people might learn to be leaders. For example, many leadership courses were celebrated annual, potential leaders can join to get those necessary skills. Secondly, as leaders have to gain specialized knowledge of their own profession, they might spend many years of accumulating experience. Therefore, almost leaders are old people.
In conclusion, while there are many people are born to be leaders, I firmly believe that everyone can be a leader through training, experience and hardworking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...r leader skill is one that everyone can learnt. I would argue that there are some peop...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Trusted
...alented would also find it easy to be trusted by others. Therefore, they are obvious ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31004366812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83409814201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1417363833 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38905504126 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155590090691 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132644601517 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239532238817 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156761941489 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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