It is compulsory for children to attend school between the ages of 5 and 16. Many people are in favour of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6- 7 ,and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18. People of this giew believe it is important for young children to spend more time with their parents, while they believe teenagers would gain more from staying in school longer.
To what extent do you agree with this view ?
Every human being should be thankful for an amazing unit of relationships called Family. Basically, it is where we all learn the ability to live as we get physical, mental and moral support. However, some people believe that this foundation of behavioral pattern is not properly laid as the time was cut down by urge to join the schools. I choose to discuss it much further before giving a final verdict.
General observation of children in our house or neighborhood or relatives makes us realize that kids generally take two years to talk and interpret the information. Where as, in most cases the time is extended to one more year. As, the child's heart is a white paper every good thing had to written before the cruel world scribbles on it. Regardless of caste, creed and money, young should be imprinted on their minds about how to treat everyone equally with love and respect. In addition, helping and persuading kids to choose healthy food in their diet ensures their physical strength as well. Such an attempt with patience and determination lay a strong foundation to child's overall health condition. As, we all know it is impossible to achieve it overnight, it takes at least 6-7 years in which 2-3 years has to be left out because child was unable to understand what adults says leaving just four years for child to attain and habituate to the good qualities.
On the other side, not having proper roots may lead to problems in bearing fruits in future. Which means whichever kid is not prone to proper nourishment both physically and morally has to face devastating effects in this bizarre world. Though such symptoms were not immediately recognized to take swift action, they show up in teenage which then is too late to find a solution. Exactly, like Mother Teresa said "It is better to build a child rather repairing an adult". Everyone should know the value of relationships, joy of giving along with personal care which enables the child to care of people around. In order to achieve this, the toddlers should spend more time with parents.
In my opinion, I agree with people who believe school should start at 6-7 years of age. According to me, whatever we learn in private, which is family, we showcase in public to be judged by it. So, i think more time has to be alloted to prepare the self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, at least, i think, in addition, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74814814815 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53400467604 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60987654321 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3390065292 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.15 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142327585285 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363536463378 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559508844956 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892456174404 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494504525954 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.