People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance.
Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focussing on physical appearance?
Youths these days are paying hefty price for their outward appearance. They not only shop from high street brands but also doing stuffs like hair colour, tattoos which wasn't common before this generation. This essay will discuss the importance of looking attractive and it will also discuss its effects on the people.
First of all, looking good does play an important part in someone's life as it gives them the self-confidence in doing things which they generally avoid. Take interview for an example. It has long been associated that when going for an interview, one should look neat and tidy as it would give good impression about the interviewee. In addition to that, good appearance may bring self-esteem to them and feel more confident about themselves.
On the other side, focusing blindly on physical appearance can bring a lot of negativity in a person's life. While looking good and attractive, people can surpass their expense by spending more on beauty products which can create disparity among the less-privileged. As a result, people will be judged on the basis of their lifestyle and expensive clothes which will eventually dis-integrate people from the society.
Another major problem of focusing on external appearance is that people go on extreme to look good. Both men and women try their best to look good which can have adverse effect on their health. For instance, some women may choose to go for plastic surgery to improve their physical appearance, while some men may take certain drugs which can help them develop, masculine figure. This shows that, people can go to any length when it comes to good appearance even neglecting their health for it.
In conclusion, external appearance does play a part in personality development but it comes with a cost of dis-integration and peer pressure. As people get so concerned about their image that they neglect basic necessities of life like living in harmony and charity.
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First of all, good appearance does play an important role in a person's life as it gives them confidence to do things they would normally avoid. It has long been believed that going for a job interview, one should look neat and tidy to make a good impression on the interviewer. In addition to this, a good appearance can boost self-esteem and make a person more confident.
On the other hand, blindly focusing on appearance can bring a lot of negativity in a person's life. In an effort to look good and attractive, people may exceed their expenses by spending more on beauty products, which can create inequality among the less privileged. As a result, people will be judged by their lifestyle and expensive clothes, which will eventually lead to the disintegration of society.
In conclusion, appearance does play a role in personal development, but it comes at the cost of disassociation and peer pressure. As people are so concerned about their image that they neglect the basic necessities of life such as living in harmony and charity.
However, it is worth mentioning that some aspects of striving to look good can have positive aspects. For example, tattoos not only help to create beauty, but also to hide the same scars. This can be especially important for people who have experienced serious injuries or surgeries and want to regain their self-confidence.
Today it is quite difficult to find a good and competent specialist in this field! And the master must have a real talent! I have an acquaintance at the moment realizes herself as a tattoo - master, graduates and plans to open a salon, has purchased tools and necessary equipment https://www.ggworkshop.net , I really believe that she will be able to help people improve).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07788161994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69630442456 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1144015595 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244938046881 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821156757988 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407049496366 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132491222901 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350793130897 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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