The trend of increasing tourism causes environmental problems in many parts of the world. What are the main causes of pollution it creates? What can be done to reduce it?
It is true that exploration plays an indispensable role in the development of any country. However, it creates many environmental problems too. This essay elaborates the two environmental problems like air pollution and disposal of solid waste and put forward some solution to eradicate this issue in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, first and foremost problem of tourism is pollution especially air pollution. Every year many people visit to tourist areas in different parts of the world. Therefore, more taxi and cars on the road which contribute in air pollution. Apart from that, litter and garbage are another key component in proliferating pollution. To illustrate, a survey conducted by Government of India, reveals that air pollution is more in tourist attraction areas as compared to other cities of India. The solution of this problem is to use non-conventional driven vehicle like vehicle run by solar energy or by battery. This can help in mitigating the pollution.
On the other side, there is another reason for increasing pollution is disposal of solid waste and plastics. Tourists use different types of plastic bottles and can and throw them on the road. It also creates pollution. This problem can be overcome by awareness programs. This program helps visitors in reducing pollution in touristy areas. The government should provide litter bins in all tourist areas and local authority should take care of bins. In fact, government can impose fines also.
To conclude, although tourism is a vital source of revenue for the government yet it creates environmental problems and pollution. Therefore utmost care should be taken with the help of awareness programs and providing litter bins to all sight seen places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, in fact, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29602888087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88923713547 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2539145321 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2105263158 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192760580786 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638809416116 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570700548105 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119201203692 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152820256576 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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