Some people believe if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it will cause some problems. Do you agree or disagree.
The possibility to work after the age of 60 tends to create many debates in modern society. While some people feel that elderly people cause only problems at works, others, as well as me, do not agree with this clam, which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, elderly people may are not able to deal with their working duties after 60 due to some healthy problems. For example, it is a general situation when people after 60 have their visual acuity reduses. However, some occupations, such as work drivers or doctors, require excellent human's vision or even may influence negatively on it. Another factor, which may cause issues at work is technology, which seems to change extremely fast. As a result, there is a possibility, that professional skills of elderly people will be out of date. Moreover, the education in this age may be a real challenge for elderly people.
Speaking about opposite opinion, some people believe that elderly people tend to have astronomic experience, which can be shared with young generation successfuly. In other words, the professional experience and knowledge of some professional, which people after 60 may possess, seem to be a paramount treasure for business. Also, some people claim, that government and employers should encourage the opportunity to work after this serious age. Moreover, this layer of society may continue to pay taxes, which may influences positively on economy and pension system.
All in all, despite the view, that working people after the age of 60 may have experience in some occupation area, which may be shared, I consider the issues which can be caused, such as poor health and disability to raise their qualification fast, as essential problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, speaking about, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08070175439 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67711250483 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3011999557 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380609610379 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148281427796 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833336370109 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264737292558 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626748902821 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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