Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Undergraduate students majoring in business are more likely to willingly study courses related to their respective fields as compared to courses in humanities which they may consider to be rather germane to their career in the long run.
In addition to the courses in humanities being irrelevant to their careers, studying additional courses will take them a relatively long time to finish their undergraduate degrees. By opting only for courses related to their fields students will have the ability to finish their degrees much earlier and proceed to the next step in achieving their career goals.
It is also important to note that studying additional courses will result in higher expenses making the already skyrocketing extant college tuition fee even more difficult to afford. Moreover, by opting only for courses relevant to their fields, students will be able to understand the subjects at a much deeper level as they will be exposed to only these particular subjects in depth. This bolsters the students to decide what they want to do once they graduate without any confusion regarding which field they want to pursue their career in.
Although not making courses in humanities mandatory for students majoring in business or the sciences has several benefits, it is important to also take into consideration that students exposed to courses outside the field they are majoring in will result in them becoming well-rounded individuals who have been exposed to other fields as well. This can also spark creativity in the freshly graduated youth as they will now have the ability to integrate ideas between different fields hence coming up with more innovative solutions to modern problems.
It can be concluded that while taking courses in humanities has its advantages, the benefits of opting courses in a single field are far more superior.
- Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They 50
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25752508361 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66251405773 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0611332526 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.666666667 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259698223367 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1299278399 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833596978777 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179853600926 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531572469332 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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