You have applied to a course at a college in Australia, but you still have not received the reply. Write a letter to state:
• The details of the course
• Why you choose the course
• Why you need the reply soon
Respected Sir/Madam
Through this letter, I want to draw your kind attention to one of the admission letter recieved by your University by the name Harshita Jaitly for Masters in Hospitality course. Its a nine month course and I have applied under the category of International Student.
I cleared all the eligibility requirements and was asked to submit my recommendations before recieving an admission letter from your side. Its unfortunate that its been 3 weeks and I have not recieved any further information. I have done my graduation in the same field and as your University is world renowned in Hospitality sector, I wish to do a masters degree from there. Hospitality department provides an exclusive career opportunities and the candidate recieves a lot of exposure to different culture as well.
It would be helpful, if I recieve an intimation from your side. As, I have applied under the category of International Student, I will be needing 2-3 months to complete my visa and passport related formalities. The application processing time for international students is already more, So it will help me be well prepared for the next stage without any delays. It will be kind of you to update my application status.
I hope, you will do the needful.
Thanking You
Regards
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-15 | HARSHITA JAITLY | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-15 | HARSHITA JAITLY | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...itly for Masters in Hospitality course. Its a nine month course and I have applied ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tegory of International Student, I will be needing 2-3 months to complete my visa and pass...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11267605634 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10304843789 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1937626878 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148325597104 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695702890014 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068085092586 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095132311764 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405920549905 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.