Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others
however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both
opinions and give your own opinion.
It is true that some people believe that confining wild animals in zoos is cruel and
that zoos should therefore be closed down. While I believe that cruelty to animals
should be avoided at all costs, I agree with those who see a vital role for zoos in
protecting wildlife.
There are lots of situations that wild animals are treated cruelly. To control wild animals, in some cases, the caretakers sometimes have to use ropes to make sure these animals don't attack them or cages to keep animals inside. In addition, confining animals in zoos is not the right thing to do. because of animal right, they believe that animals also need freedom and can make the decision of where to live and that human is not able to affect their habitats and life environments. It is clear to consider the consequences of these measures used in zoos that would affect animals' health, especially the situation in which the habitat is influenced due to environmental changes.
on the other hand, in terms of animal conservation, keeping animals in zoos is an effective measure. living in a protected environment means that wild animals can stay away from their preditors or having to live in polluted environments and damages forests resulting from human activities. This is extremely necessary for some endangered animals that need helps to survive the harsh pollution nowadays. Besides, people can now earn money from ticket selling or other activities in zoos to upkeep the living environments that as similar as possible to the original one.
In conclusion, we can improve the situation of cruel treatments to animals by asking for help from the government or animal protection organisations. If this works, we can use the zoo as a measure to protect wild animals, even some entertaining activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That
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Suggestion: Protecting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, while, even so, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01003344482 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73234526998 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6697355872 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276908365819 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118709232083 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120255279742 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182483261809 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872201591878 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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