Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent eras, the high earnings of doctors have faced questioning and doubts from general public, worse still, it was even claimed by some people that doctors are merely gaining a large amount of money from medical services charging a high price. In spite of the disapproval arguments mentioned above, I completely disagree with the idea and consider different perspectives for the certain topic.
While I recognize the considerable profit that can be obtained by treatments such as plastic surgery or other costly medical practices, there are still an inevitable need for these specific cure method, particularly for the field of skin replant and recovery. For instance, facial or body plastic surgery should be provided to patients who are suffering from burns.The destroyed skin parts and toxics can only be removed and replaced bu other skin pieces through medical help regarding plastic surgery. Moreover, further plastic surgery operation can help the recovery of the skin, prevent the unpleasant scars and at last bring the patients their confidence back. As a consequence, it seems to me that those pricy medical processes should be seen by the good intentions and beneficial results instead of the costs we mostly concern about.
On the other hand, medical treatment should not be valued by the price that ask for. With the same concept, surgeries own a relatively higher fee than that of regular checking in clinics in general. Hence, the main root of the problem that leads to a lack of medical attention on some people, in my opinion, is the incomplete health insurance or health care system which deprives those low-income groups of the right and opportunity to get access to suitable medical care. Therefore, an alternative for criticizing or even restricting costly treatments is to optimize the health care supply.
To conclude, although several critics were stated referring to pricy medical practices, I believe that strengthening health caring organization is demanded for the current situation.
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- Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... have faced questioning and doubts from general public, worse still, it was even claimed by so...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...o patients who are suffering from burns.The destroyed skin parts and toxics can onl...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
... other skin pieces through medical help regarding plastic surgery. Moreover, further plas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in general, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31055900621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73186738651 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9537284012 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.454545455 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106176556524 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397661597511 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297607694441 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529374649579 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388801166662 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.