Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music has a magical power to attract anyone's attention. Few people overstate that music can diminish the gap of different cultures and ages. Although the argument is true up to some extent, but I believe that the content, genre and lyrics of song do matter to bridge the gap of ages and societies.
I am convinced that music has a divine power to give reasons to celebrate and smile. However, at the same time this does not necessarily be true that same song loved by someone should be loved by all. For instance, Gazal song lovers may not feel the same about rock songs. Similarly, a non-English speaking person may find difficult to cope up with the people who talk only about English songs. Same is the case for the lyrics; the Rap songs use several objectionable languages and content, that may be welcomed by our old generations.
If the songs whose content and lyrics are accepted by both culture and ages, then only it can help to reduce the culture gap and age difference among generations. For example, the Korean song "Gangnam Style" was a blockbuster all over the globe. Even though many people did not understand the lyrics, the musical tone and way of presentation touched millions of hearts that eventually attract many personalities to know more about Korean culture.
While music can be a suitable mean to exchange lingual and cultural difference, the other means such as exchange of cuisine and attire may also bridge the gaps of societies. For instance, the Biryani, a dish from middle east, is well accepted by Indians, which creates harmony between Indians and Arabians.
To conclude, although music has a great power to compensate the generation gap and cultural differences, but I believe content, genre and lyrics would be key for acceptance by generations and various cultures. Moreover, people can use other mean such as foods and clothes to bridge the gaps of societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 323.0 196.424390244 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97523219814 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264981991 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 283.868780488 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4031814842 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160432151754 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552004756765 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523752867939 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972891225608 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624977971003 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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