interview
Dear Ali,
How’re you, my friend? We haven’t met since we got together last year. I hope things are OK in the end. As per your last email, I am writing to give you some pieces of advice; I hope that it will help you.
The first point I want to know is, what’s the type of your new work? If you give me this information, it may support my advice. As you know, each kind of job required different skills.
Also, I want to discuss some important issues that you may face at work, such as dealing with new co-workers, not having somebody to turn to for help, plus dealing with new managers. The latter point is the most important so you should focus on understanding the requirements of your manager and show your interpersonal skills in front of him.
At last, there are some general tips I believe that it may assist you during your interview. You should dress well, search and gain some important information about the new company, don’t speak a lot and prepare a professional CV which will help you a lot during your interview.
I really can’t wait to see you. Till I see you, say hello to everyone. In case you don’t have my new mobile number, here it is: 00966557674530
Lots of love,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l help you a lot during your interview. I really can't wait to see you. Ti...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...you a lot during your interview. I really can't wait to see you. Till I see you, say ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, well, kind of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59009009009 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64866780038 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7129790779 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7857142857 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638294086441 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241840049138 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611812101312 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390840610662 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781681221324 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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