TPO 51
The reading and the lecture are both about the elephant's abilities which make the people excited. The author of the reading feels that some behaviors of the elephants surprise the public. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. He is the opinion that those mentioned fascinating behaviors of the elephants are misunderstood.
To begin with, the author argues that elephants feel their dead are approaching when they become elder. The article mentions that the elephants want to be alone; thus, they are moving far places. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that teeth of elephants become week, therefore, it's hard for older elephants to chew grass, so they are searching for a soft one. Additionally, he says that soft grass grows near the water.
Secondly, the writer suggests that elephants have artistic behavior. In the article, it's said that the elephants can draw shapes such as flowers or even themself. The article, however, rebuts this by mentioning that the elephants have sensitive ears, so the lecturer of the elephants teaches theme to draw specific lines by touching or heating on their ears. He noted that the elephants can't distinguish the shapes on their own. For instance, they cannot differentiate between shapes of flowers, humans or lines.
Finally, the author posits that the big animal such as lions and tigers are not frightening for the elephants; but, the mice are. He mentioned that the elephants back away when the mice come across. In contrast, the lecturer position is that the elephants are not scared of the mice, but they are unfamiliar to them. Similarly, he added that based on experience in the zoo, the elephants get accustomed after a while with the mice, so they didn't express any sign of fears or reaction to the mice, they totally ignored them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of the elephants surprise the public. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Line 11, column 388, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...their ears. He noted that the elephants cant distinguish the shapes on their own. Fo...
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Line 17, column 441, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ed after a while with the mice, so they didnt express any sign of fears or reaction t...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mice, they totally ignored them.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08852459016 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5741275726 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4895411968 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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