Some people say that we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?
It is a debate going on that certain people think that watching movies at home is enjoyable , while others think that one can only be entertained with movies if watched in cinemas. According to me, there is a practical reason that affirms that enjoying movies at home is better than watching in cinemas. The ensuing lines will put forth subsequent efforts to illustrate both these sides along with my opinion regarding this topic.
First of all, due to the technological advancements lots of digital gadgets are out in market, so one can easily watch movies using latest technology gadgets such as cell phones and tablets, by turning into mini cinema gadgets at home. Moreover, setting up this type of environment will ensure privacy and there is no specific time frame for it. Anyone can watch new movies or favorite movies in their free time. Furthermore, some cinemas restrict the snacks or only limited snacks are allowed but at home anyone can eat snacks without any restriction.
On the other hand, in the current era, some people still consider that home setup can not replace cinemas. It is generally seen that some social people prefer cinemas as they tend to enjoy fully using that whole environment setup like sound echo’s and sudden voice twists that are reflected well in cinemas often. For instance, a recent article published in New York Times depicted that 40% of people agree with the above notion.
According to my point of view, regardless of time constraints it is more easy and convenient to watch movies at home. To put my pen down, I would like to say that the aforementioned statements provide possible arguments in favor of enjoying movies at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat watching movies at home is enjoyable , while others think that one can only be...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ined with movies if watched in cinemas. According to me, there is a practical reason that affi...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if watched in cinemas. According to me, there is a practical reason that affirms...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
... market, so one can easily watch movies using latest technology gadgets such as cell phones ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91929824561 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52151968442 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5377590577 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153328796979 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534207324766 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388612750245 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893787835913 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382224489124 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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